schooner boat looks like it has fore-and-aft rigged sails, square-rigged sails, two masts. I could see the dark and light blue sea and see the sky with the different shapes that the boat is built out of and the different colours too.
If I was inside of the schooner ship I would smell the salty sea with the wind blowing through my soul and the birds chirping as we sail through the sea.
Hi Enosh
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your work. I am a bit disappointed to see that not all of the work is in your own words. This is really clear as the pasted work is in a different font.
My favourite part of your writing is your last sentence, about what you might experience when sailing, that is clearly in your own words. I would like to see more of this in your next post.
- Miss Birtch