I will be explained what we have been learning in Hurumanu 1. In our class, we have been learning about SEXXY Paragraph to in proving our writing soo it can be better and it will be clear about what you are reading.
this task is similar to our conflict and chaos slide that we have been doing
My favourite part of the film study has been watching the movie hunt in the wilder people
Hi Enosh
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your second go at a SEXXXY paragraph. I appreciate the way you work well independently in class. My feedback for you would be to do some editing of your paragraph and focus on punctuation and capital letters. You have some really sensible ideas, but we don't get to focus on them as your sentences are very long and running together.
Some basic editing and proof reading would improve the overall quality of your blog post and paragraph.
- Miss Birtch